First Act - Page 1

April 25th, 2013, 9:00 am

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Reply -Ruu-the-Dasher-, April 23rd, 2013, 10:14 am

This is the beginning of this story! Meet Francis J. Luppi, the main character in the story.

I hope you guys like the colors. I personally have a thing for coloring pencils.

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Reply -Ruu-the-Dasher-, April 26th, 2013, 12:13 pm

Replies @winzrella: Thank you! I'm glad it looks good! The original version is in spanish, in fact, what he's writing on the last panel is in spanish as well :)

@Vixenkiba: Thanks, I sure hope you enjoy this comic! I thought about coloring the entire comic, but then my thesis director and I agreed it'd look better in sepia. However, this page HAD to be colored :) Thanks again!

@bluespookykat: Thank you! I'm glad you noticed the lined paper bubbles. I wanted Luppi's journal to be the "narrator" of this story, in a way. Thanks again! :)

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Reply winzrella, April 25th, 2013, 10:52 am

Wow, good work with the old photo! Not to mention the pencil!

Is the comic originally in English - the school version? I'm just asking out of curiosity.

AND I'm exited about having a change to read this!! :D

Reply Vixenkiba, April 25th, 2013, 3:13 pm

Oh yes, I surely like the colours! It's nice to see a comic with coloured shading for once <3 And you did a great job on the details, like the old photograph and the buildings. I'm going to love this comic, I'm sure of it!

Reply bluespookykat, April 25th, 2013, 6:59 pm

your colors are amazing especially on the old photo, i really like the lined paper bubbles too.

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