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August 16th, 2013, 9:00 am

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Reply -Ruu-the-Dasher-, September 1st, 2013, 5:56 pm

Replies @winzrella: Thank you! I didn't have enough pages to show Luppi and Bianca's relationship properly so I thought it'd be best if I could at least give some hints, I'm glad it worked well :D

Thank you very much!!

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Reply winzrella, August 31st, 2013, 11:20 am

By the way, the way you have only subtly hinted of the relationship of Bianca and Luppi is very nice way of including something impressive and important and still giving us the freedom to imagine.

After reading this I can very well understand why the prison scene worked so well. Using your own feelings as a base for Luppis thought must have been the magical trick to really make it so impressive!

I can somewhat relate to the thoughts because of my own experiences and thought of the past.

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